Oh man, I'm loving this Verno - Seriously!

I have to admit, I had no idea who you were referencing in the story but I knew they were G1; the name Bludgeon certainly came to mind but alas I'm still not versed enough in the various G1 narratives that can be drawn from.
(Though this is an issue that is being rectified in an ongoing fashion with the acquisition of more written material )

Your ability of weaving awesome details, both Canon and Fanon, into an engaging story telling experience is excellent as it really gives you a sense of a lot is happening on Cybertron and that it's reformation is certainly beyond that of just a physical change, but in many ways idealogical also.

I feel greedy in repeatedly saying this, but: More, more, more!